* Better photo

* Write all the text in a way that it makes sense for whomever you're trying to get in front of. So if you're looking for freelancing work, share the results you've booked for other clients. If you're looking for employment, share the results you've booked for previous companies etc.

* Basically treat every paragraph as a tiny sales pitch. People don't care about you, they care about what working with you can do for them.