The title tricks the reader into assuming "foreign" means "H-1B".
Should it be resubmitted with a less misleading title?
Should it be resubmitted with a less misleading title?
This is a relatively tiny demographic. About 50,000 US babies per year are born abroad. Compared to over 4 million native births per year. So about ~1.2%.
The best you could do is rewrite it as such: "Nearly three-quarters of Valley techies are foreign: many are H-1B"