It's a really bizarre bit of writing in general. I'm oddly bothered by how much this guy hates breakfast, without actually explaining why.
> “A sales breakfast for seven hundred people?” I grimaced. “That’s downright disgusting!”
What.
> “A sales breakfast for seven hundred people?” I grimaced. “That’s downright disgusting!”
What.
I don't think he hates breakfast, I think he hates having to give up his breakfast to be at work.