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Comment by geocrasher | Hacker News Reader

I like what you're doing but I have to admit that I am finding a lot of the front page copy to be somewhat awkward:

"Clodui automatically minifies all your HTML, CSS, and JavaScript files, then served in compressed gzip format to further reduce the file size. All the requests served over HTTP/2, which further boosts your website speed."

would be much easier to read if it were reworded like so:

"Clodui automatically minifies all HTML, CSS, and JavaScript files. These minified files are then compressed and served over HTTP/2, which further boosts your websites speed."

If you want help cleaning up more of it, contact me at my username @ gmail.

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IMO all copy should be thrown away as it's aimed for non-technical users. So cut this technical buzzwords and write like for kids. ;)

Agreed. Something like: “using our Accelerator technology, we take care of optimizing your website with industry-best practices. Your users get fast page speeds, and you can stop worrying and get back to building sites.” Then have a graph of page load times without acceleration and with acceleration and a link for more info for the curious.

A buzzword bingo like that would instantly turn me off, but perhaps that doesn't matter. I admit I'm not in the target market.

To be fair, it wasn't that buzzwordy, it's just the "Accelerator technology" thing that biased me. The rest of the sentence was fine, maybe that's what happened for you too.

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agreed, contents need to be improved. I'm a solo founder working on a shoestring budget. Planning to raise funds and invest more time on improving contents

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Thank you for the suggestion, I'll check those options

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