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Sincerely, I wouldn't worry about it. This is a powerfully written, emotive, bombshell. Anyone who is genuinely worrying about apposite word choice and non-native syntax is missing the wood for the trees.
Of course. It just makes it quite a bit more difficult to read; I need to spend some effort trying to figure out the exact nuance the author was trying to convey.