That's better, but why not use the actual title? The link to patagonia.com makes clear how "We" is. The guidelines specifically ask:

> "Otherwise please use the original title, unless it is misleading or linkbait; don't editorialize."

https://news.ycombinator.com/newsguidelines.html

It looks like the title + subtitle is too long colonized, so you could use an em-dash:

"Beyond the Office, Out of the Landfill—Why We’re Transitioning from Adding Logos"