I saw this style of writing (the separate-line style) on a blog post on some blog, which maybe appealed to me in the wrong way. I indeed took care of that, by combining all these lonely sentences into a few paragraphs after reading the comments. Before looking at that separate-line style, I used to put my writing into paragraphs, as you all suggested. My apologies if reading my post made your eyes hurt. I took your criticism as constructive, and used it to improve upon my work, which I hope is somewhat acknowledged. Anyways, thanks for the feedback, everyone!