As someone on the junior end, the tone is less relevant here than the content, and there is not a lot of content. Why do you want it extracted?
Will we re-use it? Do you just not like blocks of code bigger than X (been given this reason many times)? Do you just feel the need to comment (a lot of devs do and I appreciate it when they are upfront about that rationale and I have done this myself to show that I am paying attention)? Are you concerned about readability?
I need to know for future code reviews, so I can avoid the issue in the future.