That's a really interesting way to slice and dice it. When I read your first few sentences that's not how I interpreted it at all.
I got fact, fact, optimist. Optimist, fact. Fact, optimist, optimist.
But I'm not convinced that's a better way to go about it. What is likely needed is each of those chunks to be taken into context and when I look it at that, it's really "here is a problem and a solution to move things forward." To me that's optimistic. If it were pessimistic, I'd expect it to be "here is a problem and there's nothing we can do about it."