Yep; I agree. The original has some layout issues (the 0 line should be highlighted). But the scale is better.
In the "fixed" chart the scale goes from -130% (meaningless - implies negative degrees were awarded) to about +130%. A course dropping its graduation rate to 0 would be a big deal - but this chart implies it wouldn't be as shocking as the CS graduate rate doubling.
The top entry is at 130% - meaning the number of graduates approximately doubled (2.3x). The lowest entry looks to be about -48%, so the number of graduates approximately halved. These are similar changes, so they should look like similar magnitudes in the chart's scale. But in the "corrected" chart, they look very different. In a geometric / logarithmic scale, they would look like they'd drifted a similar distance from the middle ("unchanged").
If I were going to improve this even more, I'd draw lines from each data point back to the centre point ("0") implying movement from the centre (which is what the chart is showing).
Nitpicking mode: I'd also label the centre as "unchanged from 2011" and I'd add the absolute numerical values to the chart. (There's plenty of room!). I also find the title a bit vague. "% change in undergraduate degrees 2011-21" made me wonder if it was talking about the enrollment or graduation rate. I'd mention that its counting undergraduate degrees awarded, and that the data set is for the USA. (As opposed to a particular college, or the whole world or something).
As it is, both variants seem a little underwhelming to me.
Original: https://statmodeling.stat.columbia.edu/wp-content/uploads/20...
"Fixed": https://statmodeling.stat.columbia.edu/wp-content/uploads/20...