Wouldn't a simple comparison of the word frequency in my text against a list of usual word frequencies do the trick here without an LLM? Sort of a BM25?
Vocabulary style matters a lot to what words are actually used, but much less to what words are likely to be used. If I'm following a style guide that says to use "automobile" instead of "car", appearance probabilities for "automobile" will be greatly inflated. And appearance probabilities for "car" will also be greatly inflated, just to a lesser extent than for "automobile". Whereas actual usage of "car" will be pegged at zero.
Determining how similar two texts are is something that an LLM should be good at. It should be better than a simple comparison of word frequency. Whether it's better enough to justify the extra compute is a different question.