Good advice, thank you for the frank words.
We tried very hard to keep the home page clean, maybe a bit too much so then.
We tried very hard to keep the home page clean, maybe a bit too much so then.
In hindsight, maybe it just needs something snappy like "It's like a CMS for your next social app" (or an equivalent analogy), like startups coming out of YC often do for demo day. "An open platform for social apps" made me pause a bit too long because it's a relatively new concept.