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I am trying to be helpful when I say that for a company that produces language processing technology, your customer-facing content shows a strange disregard for language. If your writing does not demonstrate that you have mastered English grammar, why should I believe that your software has?
SRI is a respected brand with a great reputation and history. I wouldn't be so dismissive of marketing since, as you mention, you have recently exited stealth mode.
-The copy throughout the site does not inspire confidence. Your point that many texts are written poorly is valid. That does not require you to also write poorly. I've seen far too many sentence fragments on your site. You site also includes some embarrassing misuses of words, like "Some may believe using heuristic science in language analysis infers it is a learning system." These incidents discredit your claims about your technology.
-I am having difficulty finding specific information about how your technology works.
-The people responsible for your graphics, visual design, and the video about the summarization app should not have those responsibilities. Summly had nice a aesthetic; your aesthetic is jeopardizing your credibility.
I apologize if my comments sound hostile. When you make claims as bold as yours you should prepare for scrutiny. The problems you are addressing are interesting; I wish you good luck.
A comment with esoteric vocabulary might be inane.
I question the premise of this project.
The rest of the article is easily predicted.